In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

While it is prevailing to have
holiday
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overseas, some argue that
this
trend
will be soon obsolete and that people will
travel
more inside their home country than going abroad.
This
estimate is groundless and I believe the
trend
of
traveling
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travelling
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abroad will uphold in the future for three reasons. 
Firstly
, the development of transportation, including
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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, cruise and cross-border trains, has made and will continue to make overseas trips easy and affordable for the general public. Since its launch a century ago,
long-haul
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the long-haul
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flight has made overseas
travel
possible. With many low-cost
arlines
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airlines
entering the tourism market and more transportation means,
such
as cruise and cross-border trains, becoming available, the number of tourists going abroad will certainly increase.   The
second
reason to believe in the
trend
is the increasing income of the people in developing countries. Millions of population in Asia and Africa are earning more than before. With larger dispensable income, they will look for various alternatives
of
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spending their holidays.
Traveling
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Travelling
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abroad is definitely one of the best options, as proved by the history of emerging consumers in Japan, which contributed largely to
the
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internatioanl
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international
tourism in
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the 1990's
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1990's
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.
Lastly
, the increasing promotions of
travel
destinations will
also
help the
trend
to sustain. While they were little known by the public in the past, many destinations are recognized and embraced now thanks to their better marketing and the spread on social media. With more destinations become available, travellers will be motivated to
travel
more to these areas that they have not been
before
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. It's admitted that
recent
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the recent
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outbreak of pandemic has forced countries to close borders and travellers to cancel their trips. But
this
incidence can neither hinder the development of
the
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transportation nor discourage the demand of international travellers in the long run.
Therefore
I still believe that
the
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international tourism will continue to flourish in the future.
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  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
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