Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that raising the minimum

age

of driving vehicle can reduce

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traffic

accidents. While I accept that

this

policy is good to some extent, I believe that

this

is not the best solution for it.

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conclusion. On the one hand, increasing the minimum legal

age

for driving might improve

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road

safety. It is already proven that

people

are not so serious about their activities when they are young as compared to older.

This

is because maturity comes with

age

which not only makes an individual

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drive better but

also

make him responsible.

Moreover

, many

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are

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not capable

for

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legal consequences if they happen to be involved in

road

incidents because of their reckless driving. If we take any report

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example, it is likely that

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of young drivers are more involved as compared to older

people

.

On the other hand

,

age

cannot be the only factor to reduce

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road

incidents. There are other ways

such

as implementing strict punishment for violating

traffic

rules.

Besides

, it has been observed that due to heavy penalties, an individual follows rules and try to be

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driver to avoid fine.

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significantly important for the government to encourage

people

to follow the rules by arranging

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in the schools, colleges and other places. These activities can be beneficial not only for the

people

but

also

for the nation.

For instance

, we see

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change in the number of

road

accidents

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India when compared to western courtiers because of the heavy

traffic

fines. In conclusion,

although

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age

eligibility can be a good idea in controlling

the

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road

incidents, I believe that other factors

such

as strict punishments and heavy fines could be better options for the improvement of

traffic

safety.