Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that raising the minimum

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of driving vehicle can reduce

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accidents. While I accept that

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policy is good to some extent, I believe that

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is not the best solution for it.

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conclusion. On the one hand, increasing the minimum legal

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for driving might improve

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safety. It is already proven that

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are not so serious about their activities when they are young as compared to older.

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is because maturity comes with

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which not only makes an individual

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drive better but

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make him responsible.

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, many

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are

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not capable

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legal consequences if they happen to be involved in

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incidents because of their reckless driving. If we take any report

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example, it is likely that

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of young drivers are more involved as compared to older

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.

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cannot be the only factor to reduce

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incidents. There are other ways

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as implementing strict punishment for violating

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rules.

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, it has been observed that due to heavy penalties, an individual follows rules and try to be

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driver to avoid fine.

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significantly important for the government to encourage

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to follow the rules by arranging

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in the schools, colleges and other places. These activities can be beneficial not only for the

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but

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for the nation.

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change in the number of

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accidents

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India when compared to western courtiers because of the heavy

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fines. In conclusion,

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age

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eligibility can be a good idea in controlling

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incidents, I believe that other factors

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as strict punishments and heavy fines could be better options for the improvement of

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safety.