Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Makwana who was a student of Bachelor of Commerce Batch : 2005-2008 in H.R. College of Commerce and Economics (accredited with an 'A' grade by the National Assessment and Accreditation Council [NAAC]). Overall,

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Makwana was a well-disciplined, industrious student with a pleasant personality. She performed well beyond the course requirements in every task assigned to her - theory and practical by putting in a lot of extra research and curiosity.

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has a keen sense of observation and a desire to learn new skills that are incredibly important in any career field. Throughout the course,

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has demonstrated great perseverance and initiative.

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has excellent communication skills. She was highly proficient in applying the course material in analyzing the problem situations. She always explained her views very concisely and gave supporting arguments that were both clear and persuasive. She

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demonstrated good teamwork skills in group assignments . I foresee a very bright future ahead for

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Makwana and recommend her for your opportunity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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2) Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own food and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh disadvantages?

In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.