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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

#internet #information
The invention and advent of the
internet
 have changed the way of
information
 distribution.
However
, along with it,
people
 face issues related to the
internet
 that have never been before. I agree with
this
 statement, and in
this
 essay, I will discuss some of the problems associated with the
internet
 and suggest some solutions. One of the issues
occurs
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 due to
incredibly
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the incredibly
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 wide dissemination of
information
 is hacking. There are
people
 who hack websites and
then
 use the
information
 they receive to the detriment of
people
. Since the
information
 is stored electronically they may hack websites and steal any important data no matter how heavily encrypted it is.
Additionally
, what might be even worse is
security
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 breach. There are plenty of cases of data leakage that caused millions of dollars in damages.
Therefore
, the solution
of
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 the problem may be in installing anti-hacking software which may help on several occasions but the sites still do not stay 100% secure. The
second
 problem arises with
consumption
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 of the
information
. Not all of the data which is shared is reliable because many
people
 distribute false
information
 in order to attract attention, to embarrass
people
, to earn money, or they just do not check what they post on the
internet
. Often, fake
information
 can be about anything, and it is made so high quality that it is sometimes difficult to distinguish truth from lies.
As a
result
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 a lot of unverified
information
 is widely shared on the
internet
. In order not to fall into a trap, it is enough to double-check the
information
,
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 or to hire fact-checkers who will verify the
information
 before posting it. In conclusion, I believe that the
internet
 has simplified the dissemination of
information
, but it has
also
 led to a number of problems that threaten
information
 security. And to prevent these issues, I have suggested several ways that can help solve them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cybersecurity
  • phishing
  • identity theft
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • social isolation
  • internet addiction
  • data privacy
  • digital literacy
  • regulations
  • awareness programs
  • manipulate
  • proliferation
  • consent
  • escalated
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