Some people believe that current environmental issues are global issues and should therefore be dealt with by the government while others think that the problems could only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both views and give you own opinion. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The environmental
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topic becomes a hot issue
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many parties. The natural destruction caused by human consciously or unintentionally lead to a wider picture of global warming. It is not only threatening the animals but
also
humanity as well.
Hence
, the ecosystem problem concern everyone, whilst some people assume that it should be on the
government
’s shoulder only not everyone’s.
This
essay will examine who actually is responsible to handle
this
issue from
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the perspectives
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of
government
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the government
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and the individuals.
To begin
with, it is believed that the
government
is liable
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solving the environmental problems
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. It is mainly because they have
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power and authority in managing the natural resources for the nation’s well-being. They work with the policy and law within the domestic area and hands over the responsibility of exploration and national infrastructure development to certain stakeholders.
Secondly
, for
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the foreign
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affair, the
government
signs the international symposium carte and collaborate with many countries who concern with the prompt of climate change.
For instance
, while
the
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Jakarta’s state presents an active regulation in minimizing plastic usages in
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supermarkets, the Ministries under the
government
cooperates with many institutions to do research in renewables energy which hopefully developed within 10 years.
Nonetheless
, people assume that the
government
have the authority as mentioned above
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so that others think that the environmental issues lay on the hand of the
government
only. It is oftentimes problematic because the public
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tendency
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a tendency
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to blame each other. Let us learn
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the regular flood dilemmas
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in Jakarta. The regional ministries receive many offensive notions every time the flood attack the region, meanwhile, the big community is quarrelsome in obeying rules. To conclude, every one of us, whether the
government
and the individuals should self-reflect and actively participate to work together in handling the environmental issues before it leads to a wider problem of global warming and climate change.
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