Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter regards to the event going to be held on

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Monday, 15th April 2021 on International Student’s Day. I have a suggestion that if you can ask international students to speak about issues and difficulties, which they faced while registering for our college and the value they give to

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struggle.

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would be more interesting to know how much other people value our country’s college and will be good for our local learners, so they can understand, how much regards our college has internationally and how other

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people are struggling to get admission here.

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will be surely a

pride

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moment for us. One of my friends from South Asia

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wants to participate in

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event and share some details about his culture and norms. Kindly arrange the projector along with a sound system for his presentation, as he wants to show some pictures and videos of their lifestyle. Yours faithfully Vishal

MKTue Mar 02 2021

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