Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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world

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every country has poor

people

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which leads to

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apply

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world

poverty

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. According to

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,the word

poverty

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comes from

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unemployment ,

lack

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of

education

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and

population

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just explain with some instances and according to my own

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and foremost reason

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poverty

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is unemployment . There is

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lack

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a lack

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of

jobs

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is countries. If

people

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don'

t

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have

jobs

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where they work and from where they get money to

fulfill

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their needs. They don'

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have shelter , food to survive which is very important for human to survive .

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, in small

villages

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there is

lot

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of

peolple

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people

but they don'

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have any house to live

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in and

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no money for food . And there is no rules and regulations in towns to help needy

people

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no

govermental

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governmental

help for them .

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,

education

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is play

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a pivotal role in everyone's life because with

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education

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the education

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they find good

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and they get paid good money and

fulfill

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their needs and dreams as well.

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, if they have a good qualification they have good positions like teachers,doctors and officers . They

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help some needy

people

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which improve the

poverty

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line . At the same

time

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one other factor is

population

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.

Population

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increase day by day which

cause

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causes

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many problems to exemplify is

povery

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poverty

. there is

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lack

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a lack

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of

education

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they don'

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have any family plannings. which cause unwanted pregnancy . With

increase

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the increase

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of

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in

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population

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the population

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lack

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of

jobs

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,

vacancys

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vacancies

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last

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,

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just wanna say that we need to care about all

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those

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things which explain in my above passages with different examples

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will be

hepful

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helpful

to us to reduce the

poverty

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