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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
I am pleased to recommend
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Vaishali
 Makwana as a student
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 your esteemed University. She was a student of Bachelor of Commerce Batch - 2005 - 2008 in H.R. College of Commerce and Economics (accredited with an ‘A’ grade by the National Assessment and Accreditation Council [NAAC]).
Vaishali
 is a highly motivated, tenacious, insightful and diligent individual who has shown credible aptitude in learning the intricacies of the subjects taught at different levels. She showed herself as an active and hard-working student and I was surprised by her remarkable methodical abilities and originality of her ideas. She
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 shares a very good rapport with her fellow classmates and the associated teachers. She is energetic and never hesitates to accept any responsibility bestowed
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. During our frequent interaction,
Vaishali
 has impressed me with her effective communication skills and ability to analyze and comprehend. She carries good interpersonal skills and is a team worker. She responds to the challenges with a rigorous devotion to excellence, and I am certain that her intellect is capable of handling even the most demanding courses available.
Vaishali
 has balanced her extra-curricular activities and course curriculum very efficiently.
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 has a knack for putting theoretical knowledge
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 practical applications which I believe will help her while working on the real-life case studies during the course. She is
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 very eager to learn and knows how to ask the right question, which will enhance not only her learning but
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 that of her peer group. I'm confident that she will continue to demonstrate the same diligence, perseverance, and optimism that she showed during her college term. I am confident that she will be an asset to any institution she chooses to be a part of. I wish her all the best
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 all her future endeavours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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