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Nowadays, the media is paying a lot of attention to the life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports, and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do u think it is a positive or negative trend...

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There is no denying the fact that the
media
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 play a key role in attracting
people
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 from the
life
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 stories of well-known personalities,
such
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 as actors, cricketers, and models. There are several contributing reasons
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trend
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. In my opinion,
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trend
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 has both positive and negative impacts on
people
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. On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why the
media
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 pays more attention to the
life
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 stories of prevalent
people
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 for attracting
people
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's eyeballs. One of the predominant reasons is making a decent profit and being popular among the viewers. Broadcasting the
life
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 journey of a famous person is a great way to attract more viewers and
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 thing
further
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 lead to a good amount of earnings. In
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, take as an example, social networking channels like AAJ TAK- a quite popular news channel, gains
its
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 popularity by showcasing the current events of cricketers and actors and makes a great profit from them. Another point is that making a better relationship with famous
people
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 so that in the future, they conduct their
first
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 interview with them.
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, Rohit Sharma- a profound cricketer, has good bonding with many social networking services. After making two and half-centuries in a cricket match against Sri Lanka, he provided his
first
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 interview to the
media
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 which support him more.
On the other hand
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, there are both positive and negative developments
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this
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trend
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. On the positive side, it motivates
people
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. A fan of a cricketer gets motivated by watching the short biopic of that cricketer.
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 thing no doubt helps
people
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 accomplish their goals. On the negative side,
this
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trend
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 plays a crucial role in destroying the
life
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 of
the
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big fans.
People
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 who always watch their
favorite
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favourite
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 actress present affairs on social
media
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 are not able to focus more on their career paths.
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 can be led to an unsuccessful
life
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 for the biggest fans of cricketers or actors. To sum up, broadcasting the lifetime events of prevalent personalities indeed is the best way to make more profits and viewers for
media
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.
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, I believe that even though, it is a positive
trend
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, the negative impacts of it should not be neglected(overlooked).
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