These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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and conventionally produced
food
both have there own
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, but as for
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many people are interested in buying organic
food
even though it is often more expensive. In my
view
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it is good to buy organic
food
despite the higher price, as
the
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organic
food
is natural and
chemical free
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. Nowadays people are more
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cautious and to maintain
there
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physic pupil
are
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going regularly gym, playing
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, doing hiking in a weekend and eating
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healthy food
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food
.
However
thier
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their
is a lot of variety in
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the food
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population can buy
conventionally produced
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food
or organic
food
, but
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period of time
crowd
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is mostly buying
the
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organic
food
as it is natural and
chemical free
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. According to
me
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it is important to buy
the
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organic
food
if a person is having any kind of allergy to conventionally
food
and it
also
contains chemical. Organic
food
is
little
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bit expansive but it is naturally grown and fully
chemical free
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.
For
example
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you can eat green vegetables can buy
the
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organic juice from
market
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, etc. overall
in
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,
conculsion
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conclusion
organic
food
might be expansive, but it
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is preferred
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by many people in
compare
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to conventionally produced
food
as it is unhygienic and harmful.
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