Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that gadgets are enough to see films while others say it is much more enjoyable to go to the
cinema
. It is a huge loss
to produce films to watch movies
on phone
and can share feelings when would go to the cinema
but I believe that to watch movies
in a cinema
make people
much happier.
On the one hand, people
watch movies
often on their phone
, which is really a big loss
for the film
industry. Watching films on phone
are free, if anyone watches movies
on phone
then
the film
producer is not getting any money from there. It is really a big loss
for a producer and if it is going on than soon the film
industry will be in danger. For example
, in Bangladesh, a phone
company offer a movie to watch on the phone
and after a few ,days they realized that no one went to the cinema
for this
film
and they got a huge loss
.
On the other hand
, to watch a movie to go to the cinema
is really effective for friends and family. When friends and family go to the cinema
together then
they can share their feelings and it will strengthen their bonding. It does not only strengthen their bonding but also
make them happier and refresh. For example
, in Bangladesh, people
often do most of the thing, like go to the cinema
or shopping, together and nowadays family bonding in Bangladesh is much stronger than in other countries.
In conclusion, to go to the cinema
is not only to make people
happy by sharing their feelings but also
it encourages the producer to create more good movies
. So in my opinion people
should go to the cinema
rather than watch movies
on the phone
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite