5. Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today, what are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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Global warming is the increase
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average world temperature due to which a rapid change in the climate occurs.
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is a very serious issue faced by the world today. There are several measures that can be taken by the
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and individual together to arrest
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situation.
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essay will discuss it. There are several causes
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global warming. One of the main reasons is deforestation. Forests are very much essential due to
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diverse role played in every living being on earth. Cutting down
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for urbanisation and development will result in the release of stored carbon from the trees and
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carbon dioxide released from other living being
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not absorbed as the trees become less.
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, industrialisation and its expansion
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resulted in the emission of gas
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amount. Another reason is the burning of plastics and fossil fuels.
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will lead to pollution in
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a way that
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emitted affect the temperature rise drastically.
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but not least, there is an ignorant amount of greenhouse gas release from large domestic appliances like Fridge, Generators, and air conditioners. Several measures can be taken to control
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over a gradual period of time.
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should conduct awareness programs periodically on global warming,
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the effects
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of deforestation, plastic pollution.
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will educate
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and avoid ignorance among them.
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there should be stringent rules and regulations on approving license for industries.
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control
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burning
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of fossil fuels,
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should increase facilities and number of public transport,
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encouraging to reduce the use of private vehicles. There should
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be punishments ranging from fine to imprisonment for breaching the policies set by
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on plastic burning.
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should set up alternative sources of energies like solar, tidal and wind which will reduce the emission of greenhouse gases. To conclude, global warming is a man-made issue . So both
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and individuals should join hands together with social commitment and effective implementation of alternative solutions to control
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problem and preserve
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earth for
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generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • burning of fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gases
  • trap heat
  • atmosphere
  • deforestation
  • carbon dioxide
  • greenhouse effect
  • industrial activities
  • agricultural practices
  • carbon emissions
  • renewable energy
  • environmental regulations
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • lifestyle changes
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • conserving energy
  • LED bulbs
  • plant-based diet
  • raising awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • mitigate
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