In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people . Why might this be the case? Do you thinke this is a positive or negative?
Many people in several countries believe buying a
house
is more necessary than renting. Use synonyms
This
is because buying a Linking Words
house
offers economic benefits and assures the certainty of freedom to live in one place rather than the disadvantages.
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First,
in a country that still has free land and carries the potential to develop the economic aspects, owning a Linking Words
house
is easy to achieve and the value of price will increase in the future Use synonyms
due to
the inflation effect. Linking Words
Also
, the land still had low prices which made the citizens have the mindset, that buying land or a Linking Words
house
would economist and save their expenditure in the future. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, could be utilised as their business property to make a shophouse or to rent to others if they move out. Linking Words
For example
, people who have a Linking Words
house
in rural areas but already migrated still can gain money after they commercialise that property.
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Second,
having private properties makes them feel safe and not think about the yearly contract with resident companies. Other than that, it gives the family the certainty to maintain and renovate the interior decor Linking Words
according to
their preferences without feeling guilty by others. These privileges make them more merits than renting which might have several rules to not change their original design. Linking Words
For instance
, many small boarding houses do not allow to change the paint or stick the display into the wall which will have an effect hole or scratch in the wall.
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To conclude
, owning a home is a good choice as long as we want to have the freedom to stay in that place, but renting is still the best option for people who have a habit of moving from one city to another city.Linking Words
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