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The popularity of dead languages such as Latin and ancient Greek in schools is declining, as many people consider their study to be a waste of time and funding. How does the study of dead languages add to academic and personal development? Why might some people feel that funds could be better allocated?

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Nowadays, most educational institutions do not pay special attention to the
study
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 of endangered
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such
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 as Latin or Ancient Greek.
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 a change in the system of
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 studied is a consequence of the spread of views that believe that these activities are meaningless and in no way useful to
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 in the future. Actually , learning dead
languages
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 promotes academic as well as personal
development
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. As we know, most of the necessary and useful information that we can get from our ancestors was written in dead
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.
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, in order to avoid certain problems relying on the experience of ancient
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, and thereby contribute to the
development
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 of mankind,
people
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 should be more attentive to the
study
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 of old
languages
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.
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, most of the great healers and philosophers of the World left records in the already extinct
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 of China, or in Latin. Studying dead
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 would help us rise one step higher in medicine, or
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literature and
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philosophy.
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, not all
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 associate their future or future profession with industries that require the
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 of certain
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.
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, the
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 of IT technology and the computer sphere in general directly depends on the current modernized knowledge, and it is hardly possible to find something useful in old records of ancient
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 who had no idea what a computer was.
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, the number of
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 who prefer more exact sciences is growing day by day.
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 the need for dead
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 is diminishing Based on all of the above, we can conclude that the
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 of the dead is an important part of science and many other areas.
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, the
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 of technology makes it less important and
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 dead
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 become an unnecessary thing in the lives of
people
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 of a new generation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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