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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country to what extent do you agree

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It is commonly believed by some individuals that
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fluency in a
language
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 can be achieved by residing or being employed in that country. I certainly agree to a far extent with the above statement and
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 essay will explain the reasons supporting my views. To commence with, there are many reasons why learning a native
language
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 while living in that country would be highly beneficial.
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, there will be ample opportunity to make locals as friends and who aids to learn the
language
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 better.
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 when
native
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 tongue is incorporated in daily activities
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 as shopping, bargaining while purchasing at
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 grocer.
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, hanging out with locals and participating in social gatherings will improve
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language
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 speaking capability.
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, it is strongly recommended to utilize the locally used
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 to interact
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,
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, it paves
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 to build a good rapport among the team members.
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, since
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 is the place where most of the time in a day has been spent and
practicing
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such
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language
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 will enhance the communication skills and ability to speak confidently, which
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 To conclude, I would like to reiterate that
exceling
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excelling
 in a specific
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 could be attained effortlessly by living or working in that nation, as an individual can be highly benefited in
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learning
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