People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

People
sleep for
a
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fewer hours in
this
modern era than in the past.
People
can face health issues due to
this
.
Public
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should make aware
about
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the importance of proper sleep so that they sleep properly. The major problem
can
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be faced due to less sleep is the
deterimental
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detrimental
effect on
the
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health.
People
will feel dizzy and
fatiuge
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fatigue
. They will not be physically fit. Their mind
also
need
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rest. If they do not rest, they may suffer from mental issues.
For example
, doctors state that less sleep can cause severe diseases.
Insomania
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Insomnia
and depression is
the
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common health problem faced due to
this
.
Human
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body needs
atleast
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at least
eight hours of sleep to recover from it
from
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daily stress and physical burden
otherwise
it will damage gradually. The best solution to
this
problem is public awareness. If
people
are aware that
this
has harmful effects,
this
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will be serious
about
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this
. They will understand the issues and try to sleep on time. The
knowlege
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knowledge
of them can alleviate the situation.
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knowledge can be shared
to
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them
by
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programs.
This
can be
oragnised
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organised
by the governments.
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,
Delhi
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government is sharing
this
knowledge
to
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the general
pubilc
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public
through the doctors of civil hospitals.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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