You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

#visit #friend #home #house

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Tara, I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you well. I reached my home safely. We had a great time in your new

house

Use synonyms

. I can't tell how much I appreciate the beauty of your new

house

Use synonyms

. Italian marbles in the hall

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

really grabbed my attention. I love that ancient Indian

sclupture

Correct your spelling

sculpture

you placed in the living room. It brought

rich

Correct article usage

a rich

show examples

vintage look to the

house

Use synonyms

. Of course, the entire design of the building is

marvelious

Correct your spelling

marvellous

, but it is the living room

which

Correct pronoun usage

that

show examples

I fell in love with. I want to say thanks for inviting me

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

because I loved staying in a

house

Use synonyms

near to

mountains

Correct article usage

the mountains

show examples

Last

Linking Words

week we spent a night in the

back yard

Correct your spelling

backyard

show examples

with

camp fire

Correct your spelling

campfire

show examples

and I never forget the music Jack played with his guitar. I found the advantage of having

such

Linking Words

a big backyard and I like your idea

using

Change preposition

of using

show examples

that for your archery training.

Linking Words

month we have a long weekend, so I am

planing

Correct your spelling

planning

show examples

our catch up at my home

this

Linking Words

time. Come to my

house

Use synonyms

on 25th

Linking Words

month. I am inviting Jack as well. It will be a great time again. Looking forward to seeing you. Regards Dheeraj

Submitted by dheerajsudarsanam on Sun Mar 07 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write at least 250 words.
With the advancement in technology, there is a notion that nobody will buy physical reading materials such as printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read whatever they want online without having to spend money. In my opinion, I partially agree with this statement and I will be discussing the pros and cons of this.
4.5
band
The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?
Childhood obesity is rising in first world nations at an unprecedented rate in recent times. Certain people argue that this issue is mainly due to consumption of junk food while others argue that this problem solely depends on the parents supervision and guidance. In this essay, I will discuss both views and will state my opinion.
6.5
band
A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview
I am writing you this letter to apply for the position of waiter job, that has been advertised in the local newspaper.
5.5
band
Many cities are replacing cars with bicycles. What are the reasons for this? Which do you think is better?
In the contemporary era, for the well-being of society, many nations are promoting bicycles for commuting instead of cars. This shift from four-wheelers to two-wheelers would prove to be an effective measure for not only people's health but also serve as a great aid to protect the environment.
7
band
The best way to teach chikdren to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Teamwork allows the younger generation to grow their collaboration skills. Although team sports at school could be the best example for cooperating, other fields such as academic clubs also could be supportable.

You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write at least 250 words.

The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Many cities are replacing cars with bicycles. What are the reasons for this? Which do you think is better?

The best way to teach chikdren to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.