Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some
people
argue that technology has raised the gap between the wealthy and the poor Use synonyms
people
, while others Use synonyms
belive
believe (spelling) Correct your spelling
believe
that is
decreasing the gap between them. The Linking Words
widevariety
of technological advancements is reshaping our lives and there are strengths and weaknesses with Correct your spelling
wide variety
of
both ideas. Certain inventions and developments have an important role in filling the gap between Change preposition
apply
peopleof
different income levels. Some technologies are accessible to all Correct your spelling
people of
people
due to their availability at Use synonyms
cheap
rate. The Internet, Add an article
a cheap
for example
, is affordable to almost all sections of Linking Words
societyand
certain places Correct your spelling
society and
society
such
as airports, bus stations and restaurants have Wifi wi-fi spots option where the Internet is freely available. Linking Words
Furthermore
, modern technologies have provided more opportunities for everyone to improve their incomes and to develop different types of Linking Words
businessesregardless
of financial status. With mobile applications like Correct your spelling
businesses regardless
Uber
anyone can join Add a comma
,Uber
business
whether they have a car or not. (whether is like ‘if’) Despite the positive impacts, technology can Correct article usage
a business
also
have many disadvantages. A large Linking Words
numberof
manufacturing companies are gradually shifting from hiring human Correct your spelling
number of
labor
to machines for Change the spelling
labour
different
Add an article
a different
production
of different items. Rapid advances in robotics and artificial intelligence had led to a decline in Replace the word
products
people
's work hours decline. Use synonyms
One
A factory in China has replaced 90% of its human workers with robots.- the idea is good but it should be more developed, the example is only one sentence. Can you think of developing it more? Remove the determiner
apply
Moreover
, advanced treatments and medicines have been developed to cure deadly diseases but their cost is Linking Words
to
too expensive and inaccessible for the poor Change preposition
apply
people
(or: for the poor). Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
dye die if they suffer from chronic illnesses Use synonyms
such
as asthma or cancer without receiving medical care because it is Linking Words
to
too expensive. To sum up, I strongly believe that the Change preposition
apply
true
is lies somewhere in the middle in-between and it depends on which Replace the word
truth
the
point of view are we looking Correct article usage
apply
( essay
should be impersonalized as much as possible) considered when thinking about Change preposition
at ( essay
at
the advancement in technology.Change preposition
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion