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Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #events #waste #money #celebrations #role #lives #individuals #society
It is undeniable fact that in
this
 modern-era keeping feast at various social
events
 is arranged to bring relatives or friends together.
Although
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this
 ceremony causes momentary pleasure in all party familiar persons, immense money is wasted in
this
 celebration. In
upcoming
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 essay, I will discuss both
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views and
finally
 reach
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the
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 conclusion.
Firstly
, how these celebrations play
crucial
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 role in individual lives.
For instance
, one parent arranges
the
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 small party and invite all the relatives to feast on their son’s 10th birthday
at
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 hometown after staying up late abroad. No doubt all their friends and relatives will rejuvenate after
this
 party, give blessing to
this
 lovely family for their success.
Similarly
, celebrations at various occasions for different social
events
 can cause tremendous happiness in known
society
 members and resultantly plays
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 vital role in
society
 which is discussed henceforth with talking about effects of it on other surrounding persons.
Secondly
, what effects will occur
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this
 occasion celebration
.
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Celebration
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 is never completed without eating, music, decoration and many more. All the respective persons of various trades have been benefited
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this
 social gathering which can cause contentment in them as well.
Hence
, as mentioned in
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 no one can deny that there is
waste
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 of money; but it is only
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the family who arranging
this
 ceremony remaining
society
 get enormous advantages.
Finally
, to sum up I opine that occasional social
events
 should be arranged.
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 enormous money has been spent
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 these
events
, it is helpful to
society
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 well-being as well as benefit
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poor people.
However
, how much spending
to
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 these
events
 depends on
individual’s
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 financial capacity. So, it must arrange wisely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lavish parties
  • essential expenditures
  • financial stress
  • lasting memories
  • social bonds
  • emotional support
  • familial and social ties
  • mental health
  • community cohesion
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of identity
  • traditional practices
  • sense of belonging
  • continuity
  • unique cultural aspects
  • personal well-being
  • routine
  • life satisfaction
  • reasonable budget
  • cost-effective
  • potluck parties
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