In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Older
people
are not always able to earn and live like everyone else. Use synonyms
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, a long pension. But if a person works from 20 to 60, Linking Words
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retires until about 100 years old, it will be very difficult for the economy. The government allocates funds for the accommodation and treatment of pensioners, but not everyone needs it, since the quality of life has improved and along with the life expectancy is growing the Linking Words
aging
age, is necessary to increase the Change the spelling
ageing
retirement
age. It is better to give Use synonyms
people
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retirement
.
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Also
, there is the problem of unemployment, which is caused by too large a budget for the pension fund. In general, Linking Words
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retirement
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the retirement
people
exists to help the elderly, due to their inability to take care of themselves, but often those who can work and may continue to do so Use synonyms
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, which could be used to help young Use synonyms
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their education or employment, which is a huge problem for the younger generation. Change preposition
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Therefore
, the government should focus on investing in the development of technologies that are currently in demand. Linking Words
Government
can Add an article
The government
also
pay attention to increasing the number of jobs.
In conclusion, the world has developed rapidly over the past few years, and Linking Words
this
has had a positive impact on life expectancy. Linking Words
However
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this
positive trend has caused some problems for individuals and communities, Linking Words
therefore
governments need to take action to address the problem.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite