Some people think cheap air travel brings us benefits while others believe that non-essential flights should be cut in order to reduce environmental problems caused by cheap air travel. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that less costly

flights

give

people

advantages, while others are of the opinion that those flight should be removed that are not indispensable to save the environment. While cheap

flights

allow

people

to go to different nations for their leisure activities, they exhaust too much Carbon Dioxide in the atmosphere.

One

the

one

hand, more and more

people

are travelling to different places around the world to spend their holidays due to the

air

travel

companies

that charge less than other

companies

This

is to say that before the arrival of the

companies

people

could not afford to

travel

as frequently as they are doing these days because of the discount they get and many

companies

allow

people

to take their infants with them for free.

For example

, since the arrival of Malaysian

Air

, which

one

of the cheapest

air

companies

in South Asia, the number of

people

who visit India from Malaysia just got doubled.

However

, I believe too many

flights

in the

air

causing a plethora of environmental issues.

One

the other hand, the overall environment of the world is being affected by CO2 which is being released in a large amount by aeroplanes.

This

is because cheap

flights

allow more

people

travel

to different countries for their recreational activities so the more

people

will

travel

the more

flights

are in the

air

releasing greenhouse gas.

For instance

, less temperature was recorded in many countries during

last

summer in 2020 because

flights

were banned due to the Covid-19. In conclusion, some would argue that less costly

flights

give us an option to have a vacation in our favourite countries, I believe environmental problems are more important because they are posing serious threats to the entire world.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

291 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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affordability
carbon footprint
carbon emissions
cultural exchange
economic growth
environmental impact
global connectivity
noise pollution
overtourism
sustainable tourism
sustainable aviation fuels
carbon offsetting
aviation industry
climate change
eco-friendly
responsible policies
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