Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the economic growth of a country links to maintaining a long average working

time

.

This

essay will analyze

this

question and illustrate a distinguished opinion. On the one hand, it is an arguable question that a

longer

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average working

time

associates with a country’s economic progress. The development of a country’s economy requires all kinds of factors, including not only average working

time

, but

also

innovation, productivity, and social stability and sustainability. Even if holding a national

labor

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labour

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policy

with a longer average working

time

is beneficial for

countries

to raise economical statuses in the world,

this

policy

has

noticeable

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negative influence

to

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social equality and steady. Capitalists can obtain the benefits of

this

policy

to make more profits by asking their employees for spending more

time

on

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working, but not accompanying

with

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their family and enjoying leisure

time

.

This

will irreversibly split and widen the gap between rich and poor. The

next

is that governments have to cost a huge amount of budget to maintain and rule unrest societies.

Consequently

,

Countries

may not gain any benefit from that

policy

with a longer job

time

.

On the other hand

, maintaining a suitable and comfortable job

time

can motivate capitalists to change strategies

of

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making profits.

For example

, investing in

develop

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development

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and innovate new

machineries

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machinery

types of machinery

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, but not exploiting

labors

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labours

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from extending working

time

.

This

means that people who originally do not have free

time

can spend more

time

on

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consuming, including

traveling

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, shopping, eating out.

Hence

,

this

is an essential reason why some

countries

without a long working

time

can

also

become

first class

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countries

successfully. In conclusions, There are not obviously evidences to prove

maintaining

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to maintain

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a long average working

time

correlates to positive benefit to

countries

’ economies. I disagree

this

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argument.