Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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are considerably pressurizing their kids to progress, especially in their career because of the competition in the market. Indeed, in my opinion,

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advocacy of parent's influence brings negative effects on

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in the long run. Most

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have concerned about the future career of their offsprings.

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is because ,in the cut-throat competition, workplaces require talented and innovative individuals, and to fulfil

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criterion,

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force their

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to study and take part in extra activities.

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,

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believe that attaining a degree and experience will morph their

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's success. A good illustration of

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is my friend Chloe. She persuaded Social Work because of her family members, and today she is well-settled and case manager in one of the non-profitable organisation. So, to acquire a

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title and stability,

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put

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on their young ones. Personally, it is undeniable that

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are facing a lot of competition nowadays, but parent's

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will make the environment more worst for the young ones. I believe that enforcing too much

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on teenagers can lead to psychological disorders

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as depression and stress, which in the long run can turn out as trauma.

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, my housemate was under

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from his mother of getting 7 bands in writing to assess his degree, but he was scoring only 6.5 in every attempt he had made.

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over-burden on his shoulder lead him to a stage of depression, and now he is taking counselling.

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, a high-volume of

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may result in mental disorders. To conclude, undoubtedly,

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force can sometimes lead to success in a career;

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, it can

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impact an individual's brain. It entirely depends upon a person

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how to take the

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on his body.