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These seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

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Checking the knowledge and progress of students through
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 of continual assessment became a major part of the education system. In
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 I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
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 new flow of judgement. On the one hand, the
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 are an efficient way to determine what level a
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 is right now.
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 facilitates the progress of
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 preparation and additional learning depending on the results.
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,
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 are like a focal point for both teachers and pupils as they can mentally know what junior should pay attention to more.
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, the exam as a form of the estimate is a scheme to distinguish the weaker sides of the undergraduate and help them to work with it.
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,
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 like the SAT in the USA, Governmental
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 in Russia and etc. are the perfect design for
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 category of the appraisal.
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,
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 kind of regulation of
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 knowledge is often stressful and not fully accurate.
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, a
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 may have a deep proficiency in that subject, but he failed the exam. But one exam does not distinguish the insight of that pupil as there many circumstances that may have changed the results that he has been showing before.
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,
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 outcome affects the
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 too, as he loses confidence in himself and a will to study more. In conclusion, the
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 as a form of assessment is an adequate way to detect the level of knowledge in certain fields or in general. ,
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 modern
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 have a demanding influence on students that lead to many other problems. It is important to balance both continual assessments with
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 to understand completely the way
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 is working.
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