Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern society, owing to technological breakthroughs, everyone can become filmmakers, which was exclusive to big firms in the past. From my way of thinking, the positive aspects of
this
trend outweigh the negative ones. On the one hand, a variety of companies can produce films that bring a lot of benefits.
Firstly
,
this
development widens numerous chances for hidden talented actors and actresses. All talents can access a broader environment and have opportunities to show their ability.
For instance
, the movie industry in Vietnam is thriving
therefore
many young adults who are good at acting can become renowned actors
although
they do not graduate from the universities specializing in training actors.
Furthermore
, thanks to the advances in technology, watchers can enjoy many types of movies because
film
producers are free to show their creativity in art, which promotes diversity in producing blockbusters. In China,
for example
, many small private companies trying to take advantage of technological advancement to making blockbusters with low expense so that the public does not need to watch soap opera on TV again and again.
Nonetheless
, the trend
also
has the intangible risk that mainstream art of making the
film
can be distorted.
Instead
of producing meaningful films
such
as historic films or comedies, many people will create meaningless movies because they want to maximize profit. A
film
called Penthouse which is a product of the Korean
film
industry is a typical example of
this
case.
Film
producers of Penthouse try to create irrational plot twists to attract the attention of viewers rather than convey valuable messages. It would have a bad influence on the mindset of society as well as the development of the
film
industry. To sum up,
although
the new trend caused by the advent of technology brings negativity, its benefits are more than its disadvantages. It gives more opportunities for talented people to develop and simultaneously, the public
also
can enjoy more amazing movies. Aa
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