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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

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Nowadays,
art
 has been neglected everywhere, community prefer professionalism and academic degrees as they bring in a high payable job than any refined skill or expertise,
although
 preference is given to degrees, a small chunk of
population
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 values skill and talent above some basic professional jobs,
moreover
, there are some schools and institutes these days that promote
arts
 by adding it in their compulsory courses.
To begin
 with, the
people
 who are interested in
arts
 and culture are highlighting the importance of melody,
drama
, and other fading talents from our society by arranging tea time shows and theatrical events
this
 act helps to appreciate the artist and encourage them to perform better,
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 it
also
 makes other
people
 aware of the forbidden talent of our society.
For Example
, the recent theatrical
drama
 organized by the national college of
arts
 gathered a good sum of viewers showing the increasing interest of
people
 in the unappreciated talent.
In addition
, there are schools and institutes which realizes the importance of artwork in our culture,
therefore
, they have added a compulsory course of
art
, either be
drama
, music, painting according to student choice in their syllabus to help students identify their hidden abilities,
this
 initiative has
also
 made
people
 bring the long-forgotten importance of
arts
 back in our lives.
For instance
, recently a local school group from Pakistan participated in an international
drama
art
 competition and captured a highlighted position in it, showing the heightened interest of
people
 in
this
 department of
arts
. In conclusion, artistry is a mastery of a skill that needs to be identified to fully explore a person's abilities. It should be admired in all the eras of life to gain the brilliance of life,
also
 not only a few but all the schools and institutions shall add
art
 and craft in their outlines as it makes students skilful in early stages of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetics
  • Cultural heritage
  • Empathy
  • Creativity
  • Expression
  • Innovation
  • Intellectual stimulation
  • Empathy
  • Fine motor skills
  • Well-rounded education
  • Accessibility
  • Preservation
  • Screen-centered
  • Storytelling
  • Balance
  • Artistic mediums
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