Famous people sometimes give their opinions on public topics. Is this a good thing? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Well known personalities, play a significant role in our society. Influence on
people
by famous
people
is soaring drastically,
therefore
whenever they try to
share
their point of view on any general discussion, later, it generally becomes a statement. In
this
essay, we will discuss, the various reasons why
this
is a positive thing. I firmly agree with
this
because, as it reflects a person's true personality. At the outset, it is natural and duty of every celebrity to
share
their point of view, like rising prices of petrol and diesel and how it is affecting the common man.
In addition
to it,
for instance
, new laws which have been introduced for farmers in India are actually against them, a huge number of
people
are protesting against it but when a celebrity
share
his or her point of view it becomes the headlines.
Moreover
, followers who were least bothered earlier becomes part of the discussion.
Hence
, they can influence or convey their message to an adequate group of
people
with the help of various platforms
such
as Facebook, Instagram etc.
Although
, popularity comes with a mixed bag of boom and bane, so on the destructive part, if they are unable to portray their thoughts in a proper manner. Many followers can go against them.
For instance
, if, an actor does an advertisement and promotes animal rights.
However
, at the same ,
time
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he himself eats meat and a frequent user of wollen which are made by the animal products shows he is fake on the screen.
Hence
, when acts are shown on the screen and gestures done by the famous actors, actually does not match help us to break the ice and get familiar with the other person's nature which indirectly forces us to think do we really wish to follow
this
artist ? Despite being aware of the fact that personal life is gone, many well-known personalities still prefer to
share
their opinion,
then
it should be taken constructively.
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