15. Some people today are of ten less polite and show less respect then previous generations. Why do you think this is ? What can be done to solve this problem ?

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It is an indisputable fact that some persons become less gentle and less regardful than past establishments. I think

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is because some of the persons can get all the facilities without doing hard-work. There are some ways to ameliorate

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before it grows to very bad. In subsequent paragraphs, some of the

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and solutions are illustrated. On the

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side, whoever experienced or observed

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behaviour of the young generation cannot deny

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fact because they may get a bitter cup. What are the

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behind that ? If

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can do microanalysis, there are a plethora of

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is by dint of vast advancement which creates never filled communication gap. Due to it , the elder cannot understand younger and vice-versa which cause some youngers do not give respect to older persons.

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, the comfort to live smoothly has been increased by leaps and bounds which is

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of the

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. On the other side, the question is

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raised how to solve

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problem? I think by instilling good moral values and sacraments by educational institute or parents, it may be solved.

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, if parents can involve their children in some activities like yoga, social exercise, etcetera which can develop self-esteem and respect for others. To take

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example, my son of 5 years, weekly goes to yoga and in his childhood, he learns how to give respect to elders. To conclude, I have a notion that without the involvement of elders to improve the surrounding society consciously, it is very typical to mould the new generation in the right direction. Else, they need to be ready for consequent bad results.

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15. Some people today are of ten less polite and show less respect then previous generations. Why do you think this is ? What can be done to solve this problem ?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others however, say that cooperation and teamwork and skills are more important discuss both sides and give your opinion

Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.