15. Some people today are of ten less polite and show less respect then previous generations. Why do you think this is ? What can be done to solve this problem ?

It is an indisputable fact that some persons become less gentle and less regardful than past establishments. I think
this
is because some of the persons can get all the facilities without doing hard-work. There are some ways to ameliorate
this
before it grows to very bad. In subsequent paragraphs, some of the
reasons
and solutions are illustrated. On the
one
side, whoever experienced or observed
this
behaviour of the young generation cannot deny
this
fact because they may get a bitter cup. What are the
reasons
behind that ? If
one
can do microanalysis, there are a plethora of
reasons
.
One
is by dint of vast advancement which creates never filled communication gap. Due to it , the elder cannot understand younger and vice-versa which cause some youngers do not give respect to older persons.
However
, the comfort to live smoothly has been increased by leaps and bounds which is
also
one
of the
reasons
. On the other side, the question is
also
raised how to solve
this
problem? I think by instilling good moral values and sacraments by educational institute or parents, it may be solved.
In addition
, if parents can involve their children in some activities like yoga, social exercise, etcetera which can develop self-esteem and respect for others. To take
one
example, my son of 5 years, weekly goes to yoga and in his childhood, he learns how to give respect to elders. To conclude, I have a notion that without the involvement of elders to improve the surrounding society consciously, it is very typical to mould the new generation in the right direction. Else, they need to be ready for consequent bad results.
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