Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some think that sharing
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regarding scientific
research
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business
and
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academic
research
is effective for
others
.
In contrast
,
other
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believe some
information
that to
be
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published freely is more
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. I will discuss
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both points of view with my opinion. Access to
information
makes people enrich in different sectors. Sharing as much
information
as possible in public media about several
research
articles
such
as scientific,
business
and academic study is a good idea.
Information
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which helps
others
in order to get the latest
information
about the different field, and apply those on their life.
For instance
, the
research
articles about the diagnosis of Covid-19 and its treatment strategies helps the physician to control coronavirus spreading and to treat Covid-19 infection. I think
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researcher
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should share the
information
regarding
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their experiments.
On the other hand
, some people believe that sometimes a
research
article takes more time and money.
A
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research
work involves skilled personal, equipment, money, and time, result in
an effective
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information
.
However
, the
information
is valuable and important for the researchers
that
is
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difficult to be shared freely.
Business
data on product sale,
for example
, which is sold by
research
organizations with paid to other
business
organization to make-up their
research
cost. So, I think,
researcher
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may add reasonable value to access their article for
others
. In conclusion, researchers should publish their experiment’s date as much as possible in order to access
others
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and may include a few
value
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for
those article
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which take more money and time to conduct the experiments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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