Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement

Dear Manager,
This
letter is in response to the meal that
me
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I
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and my friends had at your establishment
last
week. I wanted to highlight some of the factors that we liked and a few that we disliked.
This
letter takes into consideration my friend’s feedback as well. We love the restaurant’s location, as it is ideal for people residing
at
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in
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different parts of the city to meet at a central spot. The most unanimous thought within our group was that your menu had
variety
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a variety
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with numerous options. Adding to
this
, the ambience was exceptional, especially with the live music performance and aesthetical emphasis using beautiful interior lighting.
However
, there are a few things that negatively affected our experience and could
improve
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be improved
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. The speed of the service was
sub par
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subpar
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, with excessive wait times. If expedited, it would
further
enhance your restaurant reviews. We
also
thought the professionalism of the staff
lacked
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was lacking
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. We most definitely would return having the above issues addressed. What did you think of
this
feedback? I look forward to hearing if you prefer to implement these changes. Yours sincerely, Vinod Selvaraju
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structure
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. For example, separate your 'likes' and 'dislikes' into distinct paragraphs.
content
Consider adding more specific examples or details to aspects you liked or areas for improvement to enrich the feedback.
structure
The letter provides a clear introduction outlining the purpose of writing.
tone
You have used a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.
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