Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: - Your reason for writing - What you like about the restaurant - Suggestions for improvement

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Dear Manager,

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letter is in response to the meal that

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and my friends had at your establishment

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week. I wanted to highlight some of the factors that we liked and a few that we disliked.

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letter takes into consideration my friend’s feedback as well. We love the restaurant’s location, as it is ideal for people residing

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different parts of the city to meet at a central spot. The most unanimous thought within our group was that your menu had

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with numerous options. Adding to

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, the ambience was exceptional, especially with the live music performance and aesthetical emphasis using beautiful interior lighting.

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, there are a few things that negatively affected our experience and could

improve

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. The speed of the service was

sub par

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, with excessive wait times. If expedited, it would

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enhance your restaurant reviews. We

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thought the professionalism of the staff

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. We most definitely would return having the above issues addressed. What did you think of

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feedback? I look forward to hearing if you prefer to implement these changes. Yours sincerely, Vinod Selvaraju

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structure

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. For example, separate your 'likes' and 'dislikes' into distinct paragraphs.

content

Consider adding more specific examples or details to aspects you liked or areas for improvement to enrich the feedback.

structure

The letter provides a clear introduction outlining the purpose of writing.

tone

You have used a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

185 words

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