Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Few
people
believe that
music
can play a key role to unite humans of various
cultures
and generations . My essay
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not
agrees
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with
this
statement. In my
prospective
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music
helps to
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the stress but to unite different
cultures
and generations,
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requires language rather than
music
to get
people
closer to each other.
Firstly
,
music
can be enjoyed by anyone irrespective of the
langauge
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language
and geographical locations, but it will not help us to under the
cultures
. For someone to understand the
culture
of a different religion or a region,
first
they have to understand their language to communicate and to learn their traditions which can not be achieved by
music
.
For example
, my mother
tounge
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tongue
is Telugu and I am from India, by listening to the
music
of
an
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African
culture
, I can
definetly
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definitely
enjoy the
music
but will not have any idea of their
culture
, and when I do not have
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understanding of their
culture
,
then
I
definetly
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definitely
can not get close to their customs and traditions. For these reasons, I
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that
music
cannot play a role to combine
the
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people
of different
cultures
together.
Secondly
, as per the psychology of
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human nature,
people
of different
age
groups love different
music
because of their mental and physical state.
For example
,
people
at
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an
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age
group of sixteen loves to
listen
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fast beats with huge sounds whereas,
people
of
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age
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group around
seventies
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love slow and peaceful
music
.
Moreover
, we have different types of
musics
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music
kinds of music
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and different
people
have different taste towards
music
and
hence
we cannot
relate
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music
and
age
together. Overall, I believe that
music
will not help
people
of different
age
groups to connect with each other. In conclusion, certain demographics of society argue that
music
has a great impact
in
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connecting the
people
of different
cultures
and
age
groups. I believe that certainly,
music
plays
key
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role in
the
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human life, but not helpful in getting the
people
of different
cultures
and generations together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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