Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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contemporary era we can watch

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on our own devices

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of going to theatre while others think that to enjoy the movie completely it can be watched in theatres. I will discuss both

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views and give my opinion in

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viewing

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on individual gadget has many advantages.

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, all family members can watch a new movie after certain days on smart television by using over the top (OTT) applications with minimal annual fees,

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gives more pleasure and fun for all the family members.

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, we can choose the language

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to switch to other cinema in OTT application, by viewing the

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in different languages may help to know the others culture, their food, and trends easily without moving out of

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, we can see the digital content at home any time we want without going to the theatre with the help of a smartphone or tablet or laptop.

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, these days we can record or download

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so that we can watch

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when ever

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we free. The prime example is, in India, many citizens watch

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films

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online or offline using the Amazon or Netflix applications by installing on their smart devices with more flexibility and along with friends and dearest.

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, others feel that watching

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in theatre has a great effect, a few

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which made with heavy graphics and 3 dimension formate can be seen in cinema to experience the effects and feel the experience and richness in the film because we may not able to watch these type of

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on individual gadgets due to the manufacturing limitations and hardware support.

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movie, can be best experienced in multiplex

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as Prasad IMax, which is

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digital surrounding system and effective graphics. In Conclusion, I believe that viewing

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at home by using smart devices has

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advantage

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to experience the real world of graphical representation and effective sound system individual may go to the theatres.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
Preservation
Filmmaking art
Cinematographic nuances

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems because large predators are going extinct. Why is this a bad thing? What solution can governments implement to solve this problem?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?