Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest solutions

The unlawful acts among the
adoloscents
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adolescents
are drastically increasing in the major cities
in
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all over the world,even in developed countries.
This
essay will discuss the main causes behind
the
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criminalism as well as discuss how can
be prevent
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these evil
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this evil behavoiur
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behavoiur
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behaviour
of youngsters
To begin
with,
firstly
,most of the youngsters are
commiting
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committing
coming
with
crime
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a crime
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because of their family
backgound
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background
.
The adolescent
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people
are not getting enough attention from their family.
Secondly
,poverty and unemployment is another reason
of
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bad behaviour in youngsters.
Thirdly
movies are highly influencing to commit the
crime
.
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,
movie
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like Robinhood,these types
movies
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are showing
that
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how to do the robbery with high technology.The
youg
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young
people
will feel that
,
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it is an easy
mehtod
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method
of making money.When they will discuss
with
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their with
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their friends
about
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their idea gradually a gang will form to do the robberies. To solve these issues in our community,the government has to take the initiative to control the robbery in cities.For that,
public
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should aware that the
countires
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countries
country's
law and order is more efficient to
investigte
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investigate
the
crime
and they have the right to punish the offender.
For instance
,if someone
stolen
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something,he should get enough penalty or punishment
moreover
if anyone is
commiting
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committing
any murder or rape definitely he should be hanged or killed by the law and order of the
cuntry
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country
century
.
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people
will never take the
crime
as
serious
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issue.They will think that
,
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even if
the
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they
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do any unlawful act maximum they get prison for 6 months
then
they will get released.
However
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these
people
again will get offended
with
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another crimes
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other crimes
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.
Government
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should provide free education for the
under
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privilaged
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privileged
people
,
this
will help to prevent
the
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major crimes in cities.Once everyone well employed
then
they do not need to
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from others. To conclude,
although
there are many reasons behind
the
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criminalism,everything is
managable
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manageable
with appropriate solutions.For every problem there is
solution
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the solution
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.The most important thing according to adolescence,their minds are highly
fluctuatable
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fluctuate
.There should be
a
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strong support from their parents,teachers and community.If one youngster
become
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a criminal,
this
is not his fault the main reason either his family or community only.
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  • surge
  • productive activities
  • quality education
  • social media
  • peer pressure
  • economic disparity
  • disadvantaged backgrounds
  • legitimate means
  • inclusive education
  • mentorship
  • community policing
  • youth engagement
  • early intervention
  • constructive pathways
  • social services
  • at-risk families
  • root causes
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