Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest solutions
The unlawful acts among the
adoloscents
are drastically increasing in the major cities Correct your spelling
adolescents
in
all over the world,even in developed countries.Change preposition
apply
This
essay will discuss the main causes behind Linking Words
the
criminalism as well as discuss how can Correct article usage
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be prevent
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prevent
these evil
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this evil behavoiur
behavoiur
of youngsters
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behaviour
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with,Linking Words
firstly
,most of the youngsters are Linking Words
commiting
with Correct your spelling
committing
coming
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crime
because of their family Add an article
a crime
the crime
backgound
.Correct your spelling
background
The adolescent
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Adolescent
people
are not getting enough attention from their family.Use synonyms
Secondly
,poverty and unemployment is another reason Linking Words
of
bad behaviour in youngsters.Verify preposition usage
for
Thirdly
movies are highly influencing to commit the Linking Words
crime
.Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
movie
like Robinhood,these types Add an article
a movie
movies
are showing Change preposition
of movies
that
how to do the robbery with high technology.The Remove the determiner
apply
youg
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young
people
will feel thatUse synonyms
,
it is an easy Remove the comma
apply
mehtod
of making money.When they will discuss Correct your spelling
method
with
their friends Correct pronoun usage
their with
about
their idea gradually a gang will form to do the robberies.
To solve these issues in our community,the government has to take the initiative to control the robbery in cities.For that,Change preposition
apply
public
should aware that the Add an article
the public
countires
law and order is more efficient to Correct your spelling
countries
country's
investigte
the Correct your spelling
investigate
crime
and they have the right to punish the offender.Use synonyms
For instance
,if someone Linking Words
stolen
something,he should get enough penalty or punishment Add the auxiliary verb
stole
has stolen
moreover
if anyone is Linking Words
commiting
any murder or rape definitely he should be hanged or killed by the law and order of the Correct your spelling
committing
cuntry
.Correct your spelling
country
century
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Otherwise
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,Otherwise
people
will never take the Use synonyms
crime
as Use synonyms
serious
issue.They will think thatAdd an article
a serious
,
even if Remove the comma
apply
the
do any unlawful act maximum they get prison for 6 months Correct your spelling
they
then
they will get released.Linking Words
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However
these Add a comma
,However
people
again will get offended Use synonyms
with
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by
another crimes
.Replace the adjective
another crime
other crimes
Government
should provide free education for the Add an article
The government
under
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apply
privilaged
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privileged
people
,Use synonyms
this
will help to prevent Linking Words
the
major crimes in cities.Once everyone well employed Correct article usage
apply
then
they do not need to Linking Words
steel
from others.
To conclude,Correct your spelling
steal
although
there are many reasons behind Linking Words
the
criminalism,everything is Correct article usage
apply
managable
with appropriate solutions.For every problem there is Correct your spelling
manageable
solution
.The most important thing according to adolescence,their minds are highly Add an article
the solution
a solution
fluctuatable
.There should be Correct your spelling
fluctuate
a
strong support from their parents,teachers and community.If one youngster Remove the article
apply
become
a criminal,Change the verb form
becomes
this
is not his fault the main reason either his family or community only.Linking Words
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