Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Career is one of the important

factor

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factors

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of life. According to my point

of

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apply

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view

single

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a single

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career is good rather

then

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than

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more careers . Because if we wanna make extra money

then

we are good to make one

business

sucessful

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successful

. If our one job or

business

is perfect we get good earnings. So, In

this

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essay

eassy

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,eassy

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I explain

this

topic based on my personal experience and with some instances.

First

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The first

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and the foremost point

is interest

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is interesting

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, If we run our

business

with interest along the lines of up's and down's it would be good to go at the top . If we manage our career points which

needs

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need

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to

be improve

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be improved

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then

definately

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definitely

our

business

good in the community .

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, its pizza store

wer

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we

have employers who work there they

are not behave

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are not behaving

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with customers

then

how are

business

good so we need to improve that area . we need to talk

the

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to the

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employes

how

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about how

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you need to behave with

customes

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customers

.

Furthermore

, If we start many

carees

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careers

career

and we are not good to manage all the

business

then

its wastage of money, time . And we are not good to care about our health . And health is very important to

became

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become

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a

sucessful

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successful

person . Family is the word in our life which is important to go through the generation . so we need some time for the family too. To sum up, everything that has been stated so far we meed a concentration , health and how we manage things .