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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living or studying abroad?

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There are many advantages and disadvantage of leaving one's country to abroad to attain
further
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 study or live there. Having
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independence is the primary advantage and the feeling of homesick is the main drawbacks. On the one hand,
individuals
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 learn to become independent by moving to another nation.
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 is to say that
individuals
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 will have to live alone from their family and friends.
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, they will have to manage their own finance by finding a job and will have to make their own decisions.
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, most of the
individuals
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 in Nepal live with
ther
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their
 families and are heavily dependent on their parents.
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, when they move to another country especially to study, they will have to learn to live alone and manage their
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 activities by themselves
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 as preparing their own food and finding a job to support themselves.
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, the feeling of homesick is the drawback of moving to a foreign nation.
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 is mainly because those students pursuing their studies abroad are mostly
who
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 just finished their high school or an undergraduate and have never left home their home and country. Leaving
home
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of
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 caring parents and friends are quite stressful and they will miss these things as they will be living in a new place with no known people and
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 can cause the
individuals
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 to suffer from isolation.
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, a recent study by Cambridge University found that 70% of the
foreigh
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foreign
 students suffer from depression caused by isolation and homesickness. In conclusion, the advantage of living or studying in a
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foreign
 land is learning
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independence and the downfall of
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 is the feeling of homesick leading to the poor mental health of those people.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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