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Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Every variation in the development should always be a stepping stone towards the future prospect and we should always consider it as a positive sign not a negative. In recent years, there is a drastic transition in all businesses. Many local high street shops have gone out of business.
This
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 will help us understand the reasons behind the change. In the modern era, when society is changing and accepting new technologies, they are trying to apply
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 in their work.
Instead
 of a small shop, they have started the new highly technique mall to stand locally as well as internationally in the business which is certainly a bravo change.
This
 is equivalently good for the people as they can shop a variety of things under one roof. As it has a plethora of things, many unemployed people got the job. To illustrate
this
, we can see the example of Shoppers Stop or Big
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 kind of malls in India.
Secondly
, as people have accepted
this
 change , they have acquainted the international market, and it has opened a door for those whose traditional skills were not at all praised by anyone.
This
 has happened with the help of the internet, we could have reached each and every corner of the world and we can proudly present our skills in front of everyone. We can take the example here of Kashmiri workers who are mainly known for their woven shawls but locally they never had any demand. but when they came into the limelight , the whole world knows them by their work. At
last
,
this
 is a development towards positive and we shall keep that in mind whenever we step ahead, it should always be for positive.
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