Today’s parents spend too little time staying with their children and use television to make their children keep quiet. explain the reason and results by using your relevant examples.

Despite knowing the importance of
parents
-
children
bonding most of the
parents
have been spending
very
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limited amount of time with their
children
and using television to make them quiet.
This
essay will explain the reasons and results of
this
trend with relevant examples. There are two main reasons for the
parents
to spend little time with their
children
, modern
life style
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lifestyle
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and hectic work
shedule
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schedule
.
Firstly
, in today's world ,
nuclear
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the nuclear
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family is very common and they
lack
the love and affection of the traditional family .
For example
, compare to
olden
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the olden
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days nowadays family consists of
parents
and
children
alone and they
lack
the care of
grand
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grandparents
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parents
.
Therefore
,
inorder
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in order
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to make
life
easy
parents
rely on
medias
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media
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to entertain their
children
.
Secondly
, today's unlike the past both
parents
are working and they struggle with their hectic work
shedule
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schedule
.
This
will automatically affect their family
life
and will not get adequate time to spend with their
children
. In
such
cases
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,cases
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medias
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media
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become
children
's
companian
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companion
and they get less attention from their
parents
.
Thus
,
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the life
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life style
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lifestyle
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and work schedule o
parents
will result in less bonding between
parents
and
children
.
As a result
,
children
will
addicted
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to
medias
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media
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and
evidentilly
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evidentially
evidently
affect their studies.
In addition
, due to
lack
of parental care and presence
children
may turn in to
anti social
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behaviours and may affect their future
life
.For instances, in most of the
juvanile
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juvenile
deliquency
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delinquency
cases
lack
o parental attention is the prime reason or the
chidren's
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children's
bad behaviour. No one is born
as
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a
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criminal, their
socio economic
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situations make them criminal. In conclusion,
need
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the need
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o
parents
-
children
bonding is unavoidable in a family, it is the basement o every
relationships
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relationship
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. It is the responsibility of the
parents
to make their
children
a
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apply
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better citizens, all care and love should begin from the family.
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