Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Majority

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The majority

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of countries minimize crimes in society by

imprisonment

. While

imprisonment

is the most common

solution

, preventive

education

may

also

be useful.

Although

I agree that

Education

is the best long term

solution

, the importance of prisons should not be ignored. The main reason why I consider prisons as an effective

solution

is that prisons are the most powerful providers of social justice and social security. Punishment and the risk of losing freedom

prevents

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prevent

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criminal acts.

Also

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,Also

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authorities take under control any illegal act and

crime

by punishment and

imprisonment

.

Although

imprisonment

and keeping criminals in jail have a negative impact on the budget, it is considered

as

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apply

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the best

solution

.

On the other hand

, I Consider that

education

is the most crucial tool for

crime

preventing. Mainly, students should be

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teaching

teached

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taught

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about law, social justice and

consequences

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the consequences

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of

crime

and illegal acts.

Additionally

, the

crime

is

also

an act of protest

to

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against

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social injustice and inequality. It is a fact that most criminalized regions are the regions with low educational conditions. To sum up, I strongly believe that governments are capable to minimize the number of crimes by providing equal

education

for all regions. With the help of public

enlightenment

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,enlightenment

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the number of crimes will be diminished.