some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

In our life, it has always been a controversial issue over whether
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individuals can see historical objects or
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online
instead
of going to
museums
and
art
galleries
. As far as I am concerned, I would like to express my contradiction to
this
view and my reasons are explained below. On the one hand,
people
have a tendency of visiting cultural sites.
This
is due to the fact that some
museums
need
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to introduce
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history to visitors, which will create more job opportunities for those who are
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. From
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perspective, there are many valuable ancient monuments kept in
museums
experience to show the history during that period.
In other words
, tourists can see the historical objects by
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eye, which will broaden their knowledge about the culture of other countries. An excellent example of
this
would be Hoa Lo Prison which is one of the most famous places in Hanoi attracted thousands of
people
because there were guides to introduce to them.
On the other hand
, it is understandable why some
people
are of the fervent conviction that taxes are levied on
museums
or
galleries
, which make the tickets more expensive nowadays. Indeed, the authorities should spend that revenue on health care or education
instead
of
museums
or
galleries
.
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, it is impartial that the old and the youngsters in Vietnam who are homeless need support from society to be checked health and be taught. From a view of the social, when the emergence of
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such
as Covid-19, it is convenient and safer for individuals to attend gallery online.
This
situation will help human being avoid infection in
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crowded. A prime example of
this
would be that a gallery whose name is VCCA in Hanoi welcomed visitors via computer during the disastrous period in order to be quarantine.
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strong proof that it is not only safer for
people
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but
also
save their money on
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. All things considered, I would
therefore
say that there are justifiable grounds for advocating the view that it is necessary to open
museums
or
art
galleries
prior to seeing historical objects or
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through a screen of the computer
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  • virtual
  • digital
  • online
  • accessibility
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  • physical experience
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