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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 market economy assumes
uneven
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an uneven
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 distribution of
money
 in the working
society
. The difference in incomes is especially seen in
art
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 sphere, where some
artists
 get
tremendous
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a tremendous
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 amount of
the
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money
 for their pieces of art, while others just survive. Some people believe that
government
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the government
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 should take actions in order to make
this
 difference smoother.
However
, my personal opinion is that the success of
artists
 depends only on their personal characteristics.
First
, the result of any kind of work depends on the creator’s talent, hardworking and
time
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the time
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 he spent on it. Some
artists
 do not really care about the results and pursue the only aim of getting the
money
 for their
products
.
For example
, the accessibility of recording studio
allowes
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allows
 everybody to make use of
this
. Some of
"
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the "artists"
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artists
" who use the studios do not really spend time on the quality and content of provided songs and music.
However
, they expect to get
money
 for their work just because they have a ready product for selling.
Second
, incomes for
artists
 are an indicator of their demand.
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 market economy implies the fact of competition between the people in
developed
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society
.
Therefore
,
artists
 who are interested in
such
 competition have to provide
society
 with final
products
 of high quality. If
artists
 do not pay careful attention to their
products
, but another artist does, the public will pay their
money
 and spend their time on
artist
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the artist
an artist
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 with better
products
. Overall, the government should do nothing to provide
artists
 with getting
equal
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 amount of
money
, because it will destroy the rivalry between
artists
 and will provide
society
 with poor quality
art works
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.
Moreover
,
artists
’ financial situation depends only on their ability to work hard and productive.
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