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obtained by my family, I was involved in the whole planning process. It inspired my interest and curiosity, after conducting extensive research and reading, I began to evaluate the impact of different aspects on it, which goes from the main models to the minor cultural factors, I am interested in studying the most basic but the most complex issues. How to maximise the profit while
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the environment of the city during the planning. Reading extracurricular material has helped me realize that economics is not an isolated field, but rather highly applicable to real-life issues. The Principle of Economic by N. Gregory Mankiw has added a great deal to my interest in the economics of
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is a weighty consideration. After studying Arthur Cecil Pigou's theory, which is mainly about the Pigovian tax. He suggested that the tax would be equivalent to the external damage caused by the producer and thereby reduce the external costs going forward.
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, I think the theory camp up by Ronald H. Coase is more persuasive. The Coase Theorem has been widely viewed as an argument against the legislative or regulatory intervention of conflicts over property rights and privately negotiated settlements thereof. During researching of Pigovian tax, an Austrian economist Ludwig von Mises
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“calculation and knowledge problems.”Mathematical methods are particularly important in facilitating my academic interest. To strengthen my math skills, I learned technical analysis by participated in the Warton Global Young Competition. I created a “quantitative analysis” which is based on the different indexes of one company and screening them by specific methods. Having won the top 2 teams of Asian, I have confidence about my ability to apply mathematical concepts into economics study adeptly. Seeing explanations of various theories, I began to reflect on what I learned, what other principles should be followed during the process? The
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of highest and best use requires that each property be appraised as though it were being put to its most profitable use. During the process of obtaining the
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capitalization leads to over-investment and under-consumption, I believe that every
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capitalization enables the
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to control the price of
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supply. Local governments compete to attract investment for growth and attract capital with low
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price, which leads to over investment. In order to avoid conflicts with the
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, I started to study how the policy was formulated. I attended the MG20 summit (at the summit, I was the Minister of Transport in Germany). In order to avoid the conflict between economic development and the environment, the
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generally prefers environmentally-friendly enterprises.
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in German, The “Energiewende" continues to be the defining feature of Germany’s energy policy landscape. In place for nearly a decade, the Energiewende is a major plan for transforming the country’s energy system to make it more efficient and supplied mainly by renewable sources. The Energiewende is clearly visible in electricity generation, where it has increased the share of renewables. No matter what, I intend to do my utmost
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so that I can look back with satisfaction and pride, be it now at A levels or as an undergraduate. I hope to take on new challenges that will force me to my limits.
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