You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Thank him/her for the good time you had. Describe your watch. Tell your friend what you would like him/her to do with it if he/she finds it

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Dear Zaki I hope you are doing fine, I had a great time at your place

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weekend, so thank you so much for having me there and

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for proposing the idea of spending the weekend together because it's been a

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since we met. Anyway, when I got home and I unpacked my belongings, I realized that I lost my watch, so maybe it's still at your apartment. It's a Casio watch worth 150 Dollars, it's an old-fashioned black watch with my initials written on it, the

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time I wore it was the moment we met. I really hope that you'll find it there because it means a lot to me,

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I can't afford

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an expensive watch these days, in case you find it, could you please give it to our friend Mohamed, you know I meet him every evening at the city centre,

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will save me the time of travelling back to your place again. I can't wait to hear from you soon All the best Youcef

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Thank him/her for the good time you had. Describe your watch. Tell your friend what you would like him/her to do with it if he/she finds it

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people believe it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?

Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligence than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep course? What can be done about lack of sleep?