Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination while others believe other facts like money and personal appearances are important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject great efforts plus highly motivation. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase crucial weapon seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase battle seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the singular verb pays does not agree with the plural compound subject Our endeavour and single mind on work. Consider changing the verb to the plural form.
The noun phrase great contribution seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase nation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase crowd seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb boost does not appear to agree with the singular subject good personality. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The spelling of modeling is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The noun phrase entrepreneur seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase well -dressed plus confident person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject every aspect. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase blessing seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.