Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination while others believe other facts like money and personal appearances are important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is not easy to get success in our

life

. Many masses argue that great efforts plus highly motivation

is

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indispensable to get achievements in

life

. Whereas, some consider that wealth and good look matter the most in

this

case.

This

essay will discuss both views. In my opinion, hard work is

crucial

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a crucial

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weapon to win

battle

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the battle

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of

life

. Our endeavour and single mind on work

pays

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most in our way of success.

First

of all, numerous exams just passed by a few students and multitudinous job-postings just want good marks plus intelligence which are not possible to purchase with any sort of power. Even though, with the power of notes or our beauty.

For instance

, Mahatma Gandhi put

great

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a great

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contribution

in

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to

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the battle

of

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for

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freedom.

Although

, he is not from

lavish

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family. But still, Indians called him, 'the father of

nation

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'.

On the other hand

,

crowd

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of folks opine that good personality

boost

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boosts

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our confidence which is

must

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to improve our status in society. People can start their career in

modeling

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and in acting with good personal appearance As well as, we cannot begin our business without money. So, our bank account is demanded to become

entrepreneur

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an entrepreneur

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.

For example

, some interviewers just impressed by

well

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a well

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-dressed plus confident person. To conclude, every aspect

have

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their own value. If we are from

rich

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a rich

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family plus we have good looks.

Then

, it would be

blessing

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a blessing

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but, we can't neglect hard work and passion to do something in

life

.