Some people are of the view that the main benefit of international cooperation is the protection of environment while others argue that international cooperation protects world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Environment
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protection
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is one of the hot topics around the
world
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. In
current
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global
world
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,
countries
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and multinational
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maintain a healthy relationship to achieve mutual benefits. A number of individuals point of view global
cooperation
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is
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adding value in safeguarding
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environment
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the environment
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while others argue that worldwide
cooperation
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only shielding global trade. In my perspective, I believe international
cooperation
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add value and
protection
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to both
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environment
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as well as
global
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economy. Nowadays there are many factors destroying the
environment
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and it
lead
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to big threats like global warming.
Countries
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and organization should immediately act on
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to preserve the natural habitats
otherwise
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it will lead to
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severe damage to our livelihood. Many people and
organizations
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exploiting
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nature for their own advantages and they are not concerned about the other species and humans living in the
world
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. Many
countries
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already formed
organization
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an organization
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to study the impacts and create laws to enforce environmental
protection
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.
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this
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there any many worldwide non-profit
organizations
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like Greenpeace, European
Environment
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Agency, etc. are playing
major
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role across
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world
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the world
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to safeguard
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environment
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the environment
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.
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,
European
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the European
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Environment
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Agency played a crucial role in organizing all the
countries
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in
European
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the European
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Union together and they successfully develop standards and laws to reduce carbon emission from fossil fuels. On the other
side
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many international
organizations
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are expanding their business footprint across the globe and it
provide
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mutual benefit to companies as well as many developed and developing
countries
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. By
outsourcing
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,outsourcing
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the work companies are able to produce their goods in
cheaper
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budget and
this
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will help them to trade their products economically and as an end results consumer are able to save money.
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, technology giants in
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are outsourcing their development and support jobs to
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like India, Romania, Egypt, etc. By doing
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this
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companies are able to increase their profit, complete the work on time due to
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number of profession resources available in these
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, and on the other side it provides job opportunity to many individuals in these nations. To summarize,
as per
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my opinion, international
cooperation
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is adding tremendous value to
environment
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protection
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as well as
significant
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a significant
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improvement in global trade.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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