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Some people are of the view that the main benefit of international cooperation is the protection of environment while others argue that international cooperation protects world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #benefit #cooperation #protection #environment #world #business
Environment
protection
 is one of the hot topics around the
world
. In
current
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 global
world
,
countries
 and multinational
organizations
 maintain a healthy relationship to achieve mutual benefits. A number of individuals point of view global
cooperation
is
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 adding value in safeguarding
environment
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 while others argue that worldwide
cooperation
 only shielding global trade. In my perspective, I believe international
cooperation
 add value and
protection
 to both
environment
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 as well as
global
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the global
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 economy. Nowadays there are many factors destroying the
environment
 and it
lead
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 to big threats like global warming.
Countries
 and organization should immediately act on
this
 to preserve the natural habitats
otherwise
 it will lead to
a
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severe damage to our livelihood. Many people and
organizations
 exploiting
the
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nature for their own advantages and they are not concerned about the other species and humans living in the
world
. Many
countries
 already formed
organization
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an organization
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 to study the impacts and create laws to enforce environmental
protection
.
In addition
 to
this
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 there any many worldwide non-profit
organizations
 like Greenpeace, European
Environment
 Agency, etc. are playing
major
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 role across
world
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the world
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 to safeguard
environment
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the environment
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.
For example
,
European
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the European
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Environment
 Agency played a crucial role in organizing all the
countries
 in
European
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the European
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 Union together and they successfully develop standards and laws to reduce carbon emission from fossil fuels. On the other
side
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 many international
organizations
 are expanding their business footprint across the globe and it
provide
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 mutual benefit to companies as well as many developed and developing
countries
. By
outsourcing
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,outsourcing
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 the work companies are able to produce their goods in
cheaper
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 budget and
this
 will help them to trade their products economically and as an end results consumer are able to save money.
For example
, technology giants in
US
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 are outsourcing their development and support jobs to
countries
 like India, Romania, Egypt, etc. By doing
this
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 companies are able to increase their profit, complete the work on time due to
vast
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 number of profession resources available in these
countries
, and on the other side it provides job opportunity to many individuals in these nations. To summarize,
as per
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 my opinion, international
cooperation
 is adding tremendous value to
environment
protection
 as well as
significant
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a significant
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 improvement in global trade.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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