Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?
Consumption
of tabacco
and Smoking is very injurious to Correct your spelling
tobacco
Tabacco
health
. In recent times, smoking has proven to be the significant reason of
serious Change preposition
for
health
issues and mortality all over the world. I extend my support for the betterment of people's intrest
, Correct your spelling
interest
government
should put Add an article
the government
strict
ban on Add an article
a strict
consumption
of tabacco
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tobacco
products
and cigarattes
.
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cigarettes
Firstly
, smoking and tabacco
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tobacco
products
causes
mouth and lung Change the verb form
cause
of
cancer in Change preposition
apply
human's
body. Correct article usage
the human's
Although
, medical facilities has
improved yet curing the patient completely becomes impossible for highly qualified doctors.As per Change the verb form
have
recent
report in the leading Add an article
a recent
the recent
health
magzine
, every 5 out of 10 Correct your spelling
magazine
person
will develop mouth or lung cancer of stage 4 caused by the smoking habit or consuming Change to a plural noun
people
tabacco
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tobacco
products
. Out of those 5, possibility
of 2 deaths is very high. Add an article
the possibility
Therefore
, it is important to put curb
on these things.
Add an article
a curb
Secondly
, Add an article
the non
a non
non smoker
will get highly affected by just standing Add a hyphen
non-smoker
next
to the smoker. This
is called as
passive smoking. Passive smoking eventually leads to many breathing related Change preposition
apply
heath
issues. Some can Correct your spelling
health
also
lead to incurable dieseases
or severe illness. Correct your spelling
diseases
For instance
, small children are the ones who develops
breathing problem like Change the verb form
develop
asthema
due to passive smoking.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
asthma
consumption
of cigarattes
and Correct your spelling
cigarettes
tabacco
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tobacco
Tabacco
products
not only affects to
the person who is consuming it but Change preposition
apply
also
affects a non- user
. They are turning out to be the major death cause in many as it leads to cancer. Correct your spelling
non-user
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, Correct your spelling
Therefore
i
agree that for the betterment of the society, Change the capitalization
I
government
should put Add an article
the government
the
stringent ban on Correct article usage
a
consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
such
products
which are very harmfull
to human Correct your spelling
harmful
health
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