Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

The recent survey of Global
Challenges
Report has been published in
the
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Times magazine and it shows that the environmental problem is not only a challenge but there are other significant
challenges
in respect to the
population
and the
education
. In
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I am going to discuss the major problems of India and what could be the possible solution to overcome
from
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these issues. The most significant issue in India is a
population
that has to be considered
first
to find a solution for, as other
challenges
like environment and
education
are emerged due to the huge
population
of the
country
. If we do not focus on controlling the Indian
population
then
we as a society have to face enormous
challenges
in future. In the
next
,decade we may have to deal with providing enough
education
institutes for students in a
country
, it could cost expensive study services and ,
finally
the literacy rate of the
country
will reduce. All these educational
challenges
will collapse the
education
system and it will bring all other issues in the community. It is not only the responsibility of the government but
also
citizens who are living in the
country
.
Education
plays a major role in
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society and other factors are dependent on educational growth. To reduce the impact we all together has to find solutions like building public schools, providing financial support to
education
, providing grants to educational institutions, availing basic facilities to promote
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education
. All these should be properly planned and implemented by collaboration between the government and the normal public. Recently the government has started a scheme 'Educated Bharat' where free
education
has been provided to primary schools. All these schemes and policies will boost the
education
system and eventually will reduce other problems.
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it is combined efforts to increase the
education
level of the
country
and every citizen should contribute towards it.
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  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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