Many people believe that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. To what extent do you agree
In
this
technology-driven world, Linking Words
people
are more comfortable and happy. Some Use synonyms
people
argue that Use synonyms
wealth
plays a prime role in individual pleasure. I partially agree with it. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will put forth my views in detail.
On the one hand, cash is essential for better living facilities. To elaborate, to satisfy essential human needs Use synonyms
such
as food,clothes and accommodation consistent income is necessary. Without which would drop an individual into the state of depression and ultimate depression. Linking Words
For example
, one factor which measures happiness in the World Human happiness index is financial status. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
in addition
to the essential needs money is mandatory during the time of emergencies. Linking Words
For example
, during sudden medical surgeries, Linking Words
people
may not overcome that crisis without anything in their hands. Thereby, Use synonyms
wealth
is mandatory to keep Use synonyms
people
in a comfortable zone.
In contrast, there is a time during which money is nothing. To explain, Use synonyms
firstly
, Linking Words
people
can not remain pleasant in the absence of both physical and mental health. Use synonyms
For example
, a survey published by a reputed magazine provided shocking news that 20% of celebrities and 10% of millionaires in India are under treatment for depression. Linking Words
Secondly
, even with a lot of savings and steady income Linking Words
people
may remain in dismay due to shattered family relations. Use synonyms
For instance
, 50% of divorce case filed in the family court in the state of Kerala are by wealthy couples. So, it could be emphasized that apart from Linking Words
wealth
there are other factors that influence happiness.
To conclude, in my opinion, certainly, Use synonyms
wealth
has a major role in human enjoyment. Use synonyms
However
, there are other factors Linking Words
also
to determine human pleasure Linking Words
such
as health and family.Linking Words
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