In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspaper because they will be able to read whatever they want online without paying. TO what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The sources of reading have been changing nowadays compared to the past. Some people argue that in the forthcoming
days
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offline
books
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and
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would become outdated and people can relay online for reading
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free of cost. While I agree that online platforms will be popular in the future,
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however
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I will not support that
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will be available without paying.
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of
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a computer or a mobile phone and use of
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internet
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the internet
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will
proove
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prove
this
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.
To begin
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with, it is the fact that , technology has been increasing rapidly and it
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all the sectors of human life. Most
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evidently
,
use
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of printed
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and
newspapers
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is
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very rare and most of the people in the society depend on
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e-books
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books
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and e-
newspapers
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. The prime reason behind
this
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trend is that technology is readily available and is less
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.
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, in
this
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hectic
lifestyle
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no one has the time to purchase
a
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printed
books
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and
newspapers
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,
hence
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they turn into remote reading.
On the other hand
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,
although
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online
books
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are available
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a
finger tip
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, nobody could afford
it
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them
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with
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free of cost .
Furthermore
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,
inorder
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to use
this
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facility a person could own a computer or mobile phone which will not run without
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internet
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and is payable.
For instance
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, as
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knows to aid the help of computers and mobile phone there must be an
internet
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subscription which will be payable as monthly or annually.
Thus
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, there is no fact in arguing that in the future online reading will be free. To conclude,though online reading is in its
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, nothing will be available without paying money.
Therefore
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in the upcoming
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we can aid the
acility
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facility
of
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internet
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the internet
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in reading by paying with money only.
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