At the present time, the population of some countries include relative large numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

Nowadays, some countries have a considerable number of young adults, compared with a population of older

people

.

This

essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages.

Finally

, it will provide the most logical conclusion.

To begin

with, it is clear that the increase in

population

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of the youths

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quite beneficial to

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society.

Firstly

they are young, agile and productive.

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,

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most of them are healthier as compared to older

people

. These days companies rely on employing young

people

to perform in various capacities of their organisations because of workload, stress and long hours attached to the tasks. 

Therefore

, young adults are suitable to increase the company's profits. Regarding that matter,

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physical and mental conditions are the crucial aspects that

people

need to maintain.

However

, older

people

have aged and are susceptible to contracting various diseases

such

as diabetes, heart diseases, eye diseases etc.

Therefore

, they have become less productive and may become very slow at processing important information regarding their jobs. Another point to consider is that the younger generation

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adaptable to technology,

this

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makes their jobs easier and they are likely to make more profit for their employee's.

For example

, older

people

have a hard time learning to use computers and technologies

as a result

this

can affect the profit of the company negatively.

On the other hand

, the younger generation

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very impatient. They tend to cut corners around a problem without fully understanding the effects and how it might influence their overall productivity.

Furthermore

, they tend to lack useful experience,be stubborn and

also

exhibit some characteristics of insubordination to their older colleagues.

For example

, they become full of themselves and

therefore

do not feel the need to partake in healthy work competition which in my opinion could be very valuable to them because

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their older colleagues have gathered lots of knowledge that can be passed down. The older generation

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very experienced in their field of work.

This

is because they learnt manually without the help of technology.

In other words

, they learnt on the job and that goes by saying experience are certainly the best teachers. In conclusion,

although

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populational rejuvenation might bring disadvantages

such

as impatience and lack of experience and knowledge, it

also

gives a tremendous positive impact on

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employers because of their physical and mental conditions.

Hence

, in the end, the benefits of the significant number of young adults outweigh its disadvantages.