The family has a great influence on children’s development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, there are truckloads of information from all around the world that are bombarding our daily lives every

second

.

Children

are being impacted by everything

that is

outside their home a lot, the role that these affected play is outweighing the family education. I am completely standing on the same view with

this

statement. On one hand,

children

tend to perceive the world by themselves rather than being taught by their

parents

.

This

can be evidenced by the stubborn performances or grumpy personalities that

children

show occasionally. In fact, some

parents

found that their kids start to challenge themselves at the age of 2 or 3, by shouting at the

parents

to stop them from touching or moving their toys.

This

is because they think that their family members are deterring them from exploring the world. In a word, the effect of family education on

children

is limited.

On the other hand

, society can easily instil an adverse idea into

children

’s mind. An undeniable truth is that the number of juvenile crimes is continuously increasing over the past decades.

For example

, a recent survey conducted by the local government evinced that the ages of the criminals are getting younger. Most of them committed their

first

crime at the age of 14 and was seduced by a “big brother” that they knew from a gang. These results are obviously indicating that the

children

can be easily enticed by the people or the matters outside their home. In conclusion,

although

the family can limitedly affect

children

’s development, the energy of the impacts of society is excessively exceeding the one from

parents

.